Leatham Suzie Ep 2 Similes

Gort is as worried as a  bad  bream
Freeble is like a child  a  like a running  kid
Gort is as tired like a kid
Freeble is as hungry as a  kid
Freeble is excited like a kid

Hooked Narrative

In writing this week we are leaning to hook our audience.I decided to change my writing with dialogue.

“I’am rock and rolling,” sang Sam the volcano.  Sam was far away of New Zealand and Sam was in Fiji and. Sam was singing his song and Sam was thinking and I'll volcano names Rose and but. Rose was thinking to but rose blasted up and was happy and Rose said his Song to and then Sandblasted up to and they lived happily ever after the end