One night The Evil Shadow was walking because he wanted to kill someone so he can bring out The silver so he can try kill The silver and so The Evil shadow walked and he saw a little boy and he was on a building so he was thinking and he know that he can trump the little boy.So The Evil Shadow went up the building and he trump the the boy and the mum saw he failling on the building and The Silver came running and he jump and catch the boy.And The silver put the boy down and then The Evil Shadow came to fight The silver and then The silver turn in to silver BOOM! POW! The silver frighted so on The Evil Shadow went away and then The Silver save the day once again The END!
Leatham, I really like the names that you gave your super heroes! Also, I am so proud of you for remembering to use onomatopoeia in your writing!
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