You are Goldilocks

I have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences.

 On a sunny day I was playing on the swings. My mum said dont you dear go down there because you will get eatin up by the big bears but she went into the forest.Then she was a house with three bears but she dont see the three bears. I went in safe of goldilosks to come in three bears house and she smelled some porridge.And she went dad’s bowl and it was to hot and she went to the next bowl and it was to slippery then she went to the three bowl and it was just right.

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